My assignment this week was to take a document I submitted for either school or work and analyze my style in it against the principles from our readings. I chose to analyze a fellowship application I submitted recently to the Family Liaison Office of the State Department, seeking funds to help me in pursuing my degree.
As I read over and reviewed my application, I felt good confident in my efforts and objectives. Though I recently found out that I was not selected for the fellowship (too much demand and not enough money this year…), I felt I did the best I could do from my end.
Here is my analysis: